Chapter 243 Discussion

[kAi]

Inane version of 242 & 243 are out!!

OK i got the raw, but i only got it on IRC, so if you want it, come and get it.

here we go i found hosting on my image shack, bitches!
[ Page 01 | Page 02 | Page 03 | Page 04 | Page 05 | Page 06 | Page 07 | Page 08 | Page 09 | Page 10 | Page 11 | Page 12 | Page 13 | Page 14 | Page 15 | Page 16 | Page 17 | Page 18 | Page 19 ]

and here is a text translation i stole from hisshouburaiken at narutofan.


Page 1: Title: Present
Sidebar: The world before my eyes is one of despair, but the world I feel at my back is one of hope. The unforgettable life of boys on the battlefield.

Page 2: Dillema! Obito's awakening!
Kakashi: Obito, those eyes...
Obito: Yeah...looks like this is Sharingan. I can see the movement and flow of chakra with my eyes.

Kakashi: Guh!
Obito: Kakashi! Are you all right? (blocked-out speech bubble)
Kakashi: Yeah...looks like my left eye's shot.

Page 3:
Kakashi: I'll use Rin's medical pack and apply some first-aid. Now let's go save her!
Obito: Yes sir!

Ugly stone-nin: You're more stubborn than I thought...

Page 4:
Ugly stone-nin: Man, you're all such slobs.

Page 5:
Obito: Sharingan!

Obito: The flow of Rin's chakra is pretty unstable. It's different from ours.
Kakashi: She's probably trapped in some kind of Genjutsu. He must be trying to extract information from her.

Ugly stone-nin: Hmph. I see you two aren't just ordinary kids.

Kakashi: We already took down one. We have to end this quickly!
Obito: Roger!

Page 6: (Wheeee!)

Page 7:
Ugly stone-nin: Die!

Page 8: (Sweeet.)

Page 9:
Kakashi: Release!
Rin: Kakashi...Obito...
Obito: We came to save you, Rin! It's ok now!
Kakashi: Ok, quickly, let's get out of here!

Ugly Stone-nin: I see...that was a nice combination. But now, you've played right into my hands.

Page 10:
Ugly stone-nin! Doton! Iwayado kuzushi! (Earth element! Cave-in crusher!)

Kakashi: This is bad!

Kakashi: Make a break for the exit!

Page 11:
Kakashi: Kuh...The blind spot on my left...
Rin: Kakashi!
Obito: Ugh!

Page 12:
Ugly stone-nin: You're a troublesome bunch of informants, but I can't let you go.

Obito: You ok...? Kakashi...Rin...?

Page 13:
OBITO!

Kakashi: Shit!
Obito: Kakashi...enough...
It looks like this is it for me...
My right side's crushed...I can't feel anything (some of this is cut off)

Page 14:
Rin: This...can't be...why...
Obito: Ghack!
Rin: Obito!
Kakashi: God damnit!

Kakashi: I...just like you said, I came with you to save Rin...This shouldn't have happened! (cut-off)

Page 15:
Kakashi: I'm no captain! I'm no Jounin!
Obito: Heh...oh yeah..I forgot...

Obito: I was the only one...who didn't give you a present for being promoted...Sorry about that, Kakashi...

Obito: I couldn't think of anything to get you...I think I have an idea now...

Obito: You can relax...it's not something worthless...or excess baggage...

Page 16:
Obito: I'll...give you my Sharingan.

Obito: The villagers...no matter what they say...you're an excellent jounin...

Obito: That's how I feel...please take it...

Page 17:
Obito: Rin, you're a medic ninja...Please, take my left eye and transplant it to Kakashi...
Rin: Kakashi, come here! I need to start this right away!
Obito: I'm already dying...
But from now on, you can see with my eye.

Page 18: (SFX: Kaboom)
Text: To change despair into hope...!

(whoops! I missed) Page 19:
Ugly stone-nin: Hm, I was sloppy. Still alive, eh?

Ugly stone-nin: Ha, you're just a punk kid after all...A true shinobi doesn't cry. Come, crybaby! I'll beat the crap out of you.

Text: At the end of their boyhood days, the two become one.

[Knives122]

good work, except for one small thing, None of the pages except for pg. 1 work

[Souryusen]

Well, I'm only able to view page 1, thank you for tryin' to host all this stuff though.

[kAi]

LINKS ARE FIXED!

hurry up and read!

[Mut]

wow fucking jizztastic.

yeah... but there's a chance obito is alive since we didn't hear his heartbeat stop and didn't see him rot away into the ground. so keep in mind, he might still be a memer or a leader of akatsuki.

but yeah, awesome chapter.

[Jman]

Thanks kAi. Such a good chapter. wow I was expecting Obito to go out at some point in time but DAMN...

[kAi]

2 dot sharingan, kakashi develops the bitch, obito is dead, kakashi the cry baby ninja

but still awesome, i think this gaiden is going to end in 1-2 chapters

[Raven]

Originally posted by: kAi
but still awesome, i think this gaiden is going to end in 1-2 chapters

We'll probably see Rin die, so it might take a little longer than that - we'll see.

[kAi]

Originally posted by: CmDr_RavEn

Originally posted by: kAi
but still awesome, i think this gaiden is going to end in 1-2 chapters

We'll probably see Rin die, so it might take a little longer than that - we'll see.

well obito got the sharingan and died in 1 chapter, i think it can be done.


also i would have much rathered that the sharingan gone into kakashi with 3 dots, and not 2. I wonder how kakashi will awaken the 3rd pupil.

[Raven]

Hmmm... well that crushes all the "Obito is still alive" and "leader of Akatsuki" theories. Rin must be a damned good medical specialist to transplant something like an eye that quickly. Must have been insanely fast because the Stone-nin was still standing there, you'd think he'd leave fairly quickly if he thinks they're all dead.

And I wonder how the eye will somehow progress to 3 commas? I would have thought it would be impossible to actually improve/upgrade the eye once it's been implanted.

This one chapter answers so many questions - and presents new ones too. I love it.

[chidori24]

so kakashi does evolve the sharingan by himself even if he doesnt have the uchiha blood.....so it is possible for someone not from the clan to evolve the sharingan.....or maybe its just kakashi [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-cool.gif[/img]

[Winged Dancer]

Jesus, what an ugly way to die. It looks disgusting even on paper... just when I thought this was going to be a bit lengthier, too. Poor Obito, to die just on the day he got the sharingan...

And Mut is right. We didn't see but half of the leader anyway, the other half might be completely squashed!

[Jman]

No matter what, I can still see Hatake Kakashi sticking by his story regardless to the fact that both Obito and his theory have been CRUSHED.

Apart from that I'm anxious to see what's gonna become of Rin.
once again nice chapter.

[Terracosmo]

Oh my.

[Mut]

okay so i guess this means that... kakashi developes the third comma on his own. kinda cool but also not really following the story... if only selected uchihas get sharingan, how would someone from a different clan be even able to develope it... but then again, kakashi is a major badass so it's understandable. i guess then developing the sharingan isn't that much of a deal, i think it's only a matter of who can be born with the ability to have it. i think that would make the most sense.

i better not see any 'kakashi can awaken mangekyou sharingan' theories. cuz we KNOW that's impossible since itachi said only full blooded uchihas can awaken it.

EDIT: and yeah, rin must be a badass nin cuz she patched up junior kakashi in a hurry.

[JusDaMan]

Sharingan is able to develop inside another user... since kakshi got it when it was 2 dot(pre naruto). and during the nauto he got 3 dot. if thats the case he should be able to get mangekyou. only requirement is to kill a close one. but side kakashi's close ones died he can't develop it

[chidori24]

i dont see why cant kakashi develop the mange sharingan....he did evolve the sharingan himself to three commas even though he doesnt have the uchiha blood but i doubt that he'd be able to awaken it. so i guess the sharingan can be evolved but it cannot be used at its full potential.

[Ryllharu]

I honestly didn't think Kishimoto would kill off a character with this extent of blood, gore and violence. (For Naruto, it's alot) If this isn't just an isolated incident, when the Gaiden ends and Naruto Z starts, we might be in for a treat. More mature ninja, probably more mature readers (in Japan anyway, not in this forum), and hopefully, more mature content.

At least this will be an end to the stupid Obito is alive (and simply on the basis that he is alive, he is DEFINITELY the leader of Akatsuki) theory. Only now we're stuck with "Kakashi awakened the thrid dot SOMEHOW, so he must be able to use Mangekyo in BOTH eyes!!!OMFGZZ!!!"

If Rin is going to die in the next two chapters, I suspect that is how Kakashi develops the third comma.

All in all, a great chapter.

[Souryusen]

Kishimoto sure doesn't believe in wasting time.

Bottom of pg 18 kicks ass.

[Death BOO Z]

Originally posted by: Ryllharu
At least this will be an end to the stupid Obito is alive (and simply on the basis that he is alive, he is DEFINITELY the leader of Akatsuki) theory. Only now we're stuck with "Kakashi awakened the thrid dot SOMEHOW, so he must be able to use Mangekyo in BOTH eyes!!!OMFGZZ!!!"
.

you can't forget that now people will say "OMFG!!~!1 Kakashi has two souls in him! he's both kakashi and obito! he's like Sakura with her inner sakura! it means that Sakura will also be a bad ass like him cuz Kakashi, Naruto and Gaara all have two people inside them (kakashi + obito, Naruto + kyubi, Gaara and his mommie)!"

really, i'm giving it two weeks before some idiot comes and says something like that.