temari's more of a babe than 90% of the other female ninjas
it does seem lame for them all to survive, but i also wouldnt be surprised if the medical abilities of konoha become greatly strengthen under the command of tsunade. She was pushing some pretty radical ideas to the 3rd back when he was hokage, and now that she's the one in charge, there might very well be 1/4 of the konoha ninjas focused on medicine.
10/4/04 - 8/20/07
its times like this i wish i knew japanese
Wow, Temari's lying the smackdown on Shikamaru just 'cause he's feeling all guilty and stuff about his best friend almost dieing, all of his comrades getting badly wounded and the mission failing!!
And his father - priceless!! That's just how you treat a son who's worrying about his friends. Yep. You call him a coward. How sweet.
But hey, Tsunade's figured out how to bring Chouji back from the pill's effect, and Shizune did something real weird with some hair and now Neji doesn't have a hole in the middle of his chest!! ME HAPPY. Neji is alive!! Wheeee!!!
And Akamaru is alive. Kiba's wound is not lethal at all, according to the Konoha medic squad, and Akamaru'll heal soon according to Kiba's sister, who's way too cool because she brought like nine dogs to the hospital with her.
Temari should shut up though... poor Shikamaru has so much brought upon him in such little time and yet she's bitching at him. Pfff.
What I wanna see, however, is Gaara. And Naruto.
But noooo, next chapter is named (so far) "The Broken Promise", so we'll most probably have Sakura angsting, Naruto angsting, and then maybe in two weeks things'll get interesting again!!
BUT, Akamaru is alive and Neji is alive.
Everything else in unimportant right now.
::Goes off to get a beer to celebrate Neji::
Edit: Well, I got mah beer and I read through the past post... I have a test tomorrow, but since I'm happy I'll try to do a quick translation for y'all. <phone operator>Wait please!</phone>
BTW, the new opening and ending theme songs make me go into my fangirl mode, so excuse any "TEH!!!11!OMFGKWELLL!!!one" I may splurt.
So, better late than never!
AS ALWAYS, HEED THE CAPS AND DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT SPOILERS.
Page 1
Shikamarus first squad mission. The battles in where cruelty reigned, the things that were left there...
(Or The ones that were left there )
Title: The Mission, Failed
Page 2
Side-letters: Naruto awakens on Kakashi's back. To accept the reality he finds there...
Naruto Nn...
...
...Kakashi-sensei,,,
Page 3
Naruto: ...where's Sasuke...?
Konoha medic: Kakashi-san!!
How's Uzumaki Naruto's condition?
Kakashi He's alright.
Page 4
Konoha Medic Sasuke... Where's Uchiha Sasuke?!
Konoha Medic 2 .......
Kakashi What's the condition of the other genin?
Konoha Medic 2 Yes!
The Hokage-sama's first and second orders were for the medical squad to depart, we were then to find the squad leader and go through various places to recover the team...
After performing emergency aid, we took them back.
(Not sure about that. Very hard, it was!)
Page 5
Kakashi And their conditions are?
Konoha Medic Yes!
Nara Shikamaru has a minor injury.
Inuzuka Kiba's wound is rather deep, but his life is not in danger.
Hyuuga Neji, Akimichi Chouji... the two of them are in severe danger.
At this moment, I don't have an estimation on them.
Naruto &
Everyone...
Page 6
Tsunade
There's quite some information on the pill's ingredients and effects...
Good, just like I expected.
Page 7
Tsunade
Bring me some more deer's horn!
Someone! Yes!
Kiba What do you think, sis...?
Page 8
Kiba's sister He wont be able to take a stroll for the time being.
It seems like his leg's muscles were cut.
Kiba Sis, you are a vet... can't you try to...-?
Kiba's sis It's fine. It'll take some time, but there's no risk to his life, so don't worry.
Above that, you, too!!
Kiba Ou-ou-ouch!!
Aaah... fine, I get it...
Page 9
Konoha medic It'll soon be three hours... I need to change places.
Konoha medic 2 Yes!
Page 10
Shizune We'll have to restore this boy's body using his hair.
Don't miscount the percentage of lost cells!!
(OK, confusing, difficult, not sure)
Konoha medics Yes!!
Page 11
Temari Guess you can't help feeling nervous.
The bluffing is just to accompany the mission...
Shouldn't you have to strengthen your mind, too?
Shikamaru .... (annoyed. Can't blame him).
Page 12
[p]Temari (I think)[/b] Practice and reality are different.
You have to understand whats going on at a mission... that's the way the shinobi's world is, you should be able to understand that.
Shikamaru You know... this was my first mission as a platoon commander...
With this, I understand...
I don't want to keep being a shinobi.
Temari .....
What, your suddenly felt fragile or something? Feh, what a sorry excuse of a man.
Page 13
Shikamaru This time, I wasn't able to do anything as a squad leader. I just trusted everyone.
I was too soft. I didn't have enough power... it was all my fault.
Temari ...are you afraid you'll get injured?
Shikamaru ...
SFX: Gets up, leaves.
Shikamaru's father Heeey, Shikamaru...
Since you are losing to a girl's speech, you running away...?
Shikamaru Bah, I'm no girl to sit through such a troublesome sermon...
Shikamaru's Father Ah, but you are no man either...
You are just a coward.
Even if you quit being a shinobi, the missions are gonna continue. Just someone else will do it.
Your comrades just'll go under a different leader. They'll just keep going out.
And there, you'll comrades could even die...
Page 15
Still Shika's father ...but if at that time you were the commander... maybe your friends wouldn't end that way...
So this time, take into consideration this experience and think about it...
Starting from this mission, you can begin to perfect yourself. (not sure here)
If you really think your friends are important, before thinking of running away try thinking about their melancholy first!
(Ack, not sure! Shimarau's dad talks weirdly!)
Page 16
Shikamaru's dad That's what true friends do! You coward!
SFX: Steps, door opens.
Page 17
Tsunade It's alright now!
Weve copied and reproduced the pi'ls components and stopped the invasion from within ...for the time being, he's safe, Shikamaru.
I used a Nara Family Medicine Preparation manual to do the remedy. Without that one book it woul've been trouble...!
It was all thanks to Higoro (Shika's dad) study...
Shikamaru's dad Why thanks...
Shizune TSUNADE-SAMA!!
Page 18
Shizune Hyuuga Neji... We have secured him beyond the safe-line!
Besides that, a report arrived...
At this moment, Hatake Kakashi and Uzumaki Naruto, due to orders, are arriving together.
Reports are not clear yet, but there are no threats to the life of any of them.
Tsunade So just two of them...
Page 19
Well Shikamaru, it seems that the mission was failed, mh?
But... Everyone is alive. And that counts above everything.
Shikamaru Next time... it'll be perfect, I'll show you...!
Side letters: Nothing was left behind. Tears of relief cover his cheeks. Above anyone else, the feelings for his friends... for this reason, a man grows stronger!
No. 235 -- Owari.
Next time, "The Broken Promise"!!
And now I'll go to sleep, and wish me luck on my exams since I actually stopped studying to do this =P
Arigatou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suerte en el examen [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif[/img]
(Higoro? I thought his name was Shikato)
good luck dancer, thanx, and goodnight
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Thanks Dancer and good luck on your test.
thanks winged dancer!!
i think using neji's hair to heal that wound was pretty interesting. neji is alive---!
I tried my best...
hell yeah it was really ingenious, using hair to heal nejis wounds(hair is made up of dead cells, so tsunade just brought them back to life and transfered them to the holes in Nejis body) i dont really care about chouji, live or die he wont affect the overall story IMO
R.I.P Captain America.
freakin sweet translation there, thanks
CHouji and Neji are still alive. Hell freaking yeah. Although it would have been interesting if they hadn't... I had started to really like them with this arc. It'd be a shame to see an already emotionally powerful character like Neji, who was also becoming likable, and Chouji, who had finally gotten some damn good development, die before their time.
And next chapter will begin a new purpose for Naruto. His promise isn't broken, just unfufilled. He DID say it was the promise of a lifetime after all.
Is there a mirror site? that server no longer accepts requests![img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-frown.gif[/img]
update: nevermind!
i liked this chapter very much alot of development and talking...cant wait till next week either. to see sakura's reaction.
all of them live...i didnt think this was going to happen i thought chouji would have died.
THNX Winged Dancer for taking time from your studies to translate...and good luck!!!
Thank you Winged Dancer and good luck in your exam.
looks like next chapter would be about Sakura and Naruto
*chants* NEJI NEJI NEJI NEJI NEJI NEJI!!!!!!!!!!
*chants more* CHOJI CHOJI CHOJI CHOJI CHOJI!!!!!!!!
Yey, they're alive, I've always liked them both but more Neji cos he's cool like that. Plus he my fave character so yea, lol. This could mean Choji being slim now he could stay that way cos he feels better like that nad may possible still have the strength of the pills still in him when he's finally healed up. Also using Neji's hair to heal him might lead to Neji having a new hair cut, EEP!
Anyway, can't wait to see the rest!
I don't care who I have to fight!
If he rips my arms off, I'll kick him to death!
If he rips my legs off, I'll bite him to death!
If he rips my head off, I'll stare him to death!
And if he gouges out my eyes, I'll curse him from beyond the grave!
you , need to relax ..for real..
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You're all welcome, everyone.... I can't wait for next week either. I wonder, will Sakura be all bitchy? Or maybe she'll be understanding and remind Naruto that it was the promise of a life-time and therefore he still has to full-fill it?
I think it'll be the second one, since that's definitely flashback material. Whenever Naruto is at risk of dieing, he'll suddenly think of Sakura saying "So Naruto, you can't die before you bring him back!" and wont die =P
Mmmmmmh, and it might just be me, but I'd like to see Hinata visiting Neji at the hospital. You know, just to see if his attitude towards her has changed. A little.
Im just glad that we got to see the other konoha genin and im glad that nobody is dead cause they grew in the last mission and it would be waste to kill them off.
Choji finally got that lyposuction he needed, otherwise this was a pretty good chapter and great quality for a raw.
yea but to that its not fair to say that neji should survive he was worse of than chouji a fuckin huge hole through his upper chest/shoulder. bleeding to death from that isnt all that hard and doesnt take all that much time so unless the medic nins were there right after he got peirced he should be dead. what i meant to say was if chouji dies neji should to.Originally posted by: Terracosmo
PSJ, I'm disappointed because I want people to DIE!
I don't like that everybody are invincible, it just feels so fake... and if Chouji died now it would kick ass because he went out with such a bang... a bang which will be forgotten if he recovers and go back to his fat snack abusing self.
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