Hi! Check out my fan fic!

**Catalyst** · Sun, 05-16-2004, 11:25 AM

Hi check out my fan fic and tell me what you guys think. It's NaruHina and it's got spoilers from 210 manga. Any comments are welcomed.

Thanks!

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?s...&chapter=1

**L8r** · Sun, 05-16-2004, 02:22 PM

DAMN!!! [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-shocked.gif[/img]
that was great

really like chp5

when will the next chapter be out?

EDIT: removing some minor spoliers

**Catalyst** · Sun, 05-16-2004, 04:01 PM

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I got a beta due to my horrible grammar, the next fic is being betad at the moment and should be ready pretty soon. I'll mail when it's up

**Toruxxx** · Sun, 05-16-2004, 08:21 PM

damn i still aint read it all aving a break lol on ch6 but so far it is really good like it very much gj dude!! ^_^

**Stægan** · Tue, 05-18-2004, 01:19 PM

omg!!! that was the best ewah

really loved the narutoxhinata

**Catalyst** · Wed, 05-19-2004, 04:33 AM

Thanks guys, I hope Gansaku freaked you out a bit [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif[/img]

**Catalyst** · Fri, 05-21-2004, 04:15 AM

Hey guy's I just uploaded the next chapter to the fic if you anna have a look

**Stægan** · Fri, 05-21-2004, 01:23 PM

i loved it.....keep on writing

**L8r** · Fri, 05-21-2004, 02:01 PM

great chapter
keepem comeing [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif[/img]

**Toruxxx** · Sat, 05-22-2004, 08:05 AM

Originally posted by: Catalyst
Hey guy's I just uploaded the next chapter to the fic if you anna have a look

woot ^_^ ur work is gr8!

**Catalyst** · Sat, 06-19-2004, 04:45 AM

I've just put up the next chapter, check it oot!

**Kale Ironfist** · Sat, 06-19-2004, 05:35 AM

and i like it

**L8r** · Sat, 06-19-2004, 12:55 PM

its just keep geting better and better [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif[/img]

realy like it when kyubi talks to naruto =)

just one question..... how will the next chapter start? i mean in the end of this chapter 4 years past.....
what happened to jira and narutos training/misson?

**meroko01** · Sat, 06-19-2004, 04:22 PM

i loved your fic ^^ .. please update it soon ^^

**Catalyst** · Sat, 06-19-2004, 07:23 PM

I'm glad the chapters been well recived, it was really hard writing Hinata's and Hiashi's confrontation.

L8r in reply to your question I plan the next chapters to be with Naruto, Jiraiya and Hinata travelling around the Nin countries learning new skills. It could take a minimum of 5 chapters but will probs end up as more.

Thanks everyone for reading and taking the time to give me feedback [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif[/img].

**Lenas** · Sun, 06-20-2004, 05:44 AM

Read 1 through 8 back to back. Very good so far.

**hornetmike** · Wed, 06-23-2004, 01:24 AM

Dude awesome fanfic. One of the best i've ever read. You most definetely have to continue writing.

Chapter 8 was by far my favourite. Hurray for hinata! Continue writing

**Knives122** · Wed, 06-23-2004, 06:34 PM

sumed up in one word: WOW

**meroko01** · Wed, 06-23-2004, 07:52 PM

neji should be with tenten .. xD .. GOGO Shikamaru! xD

**Catalyst** · Mon, 06-28-2004, 05:07 PM

Thank you everyone! thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!

Your feed back means the world to me, any way the reason I've posted this is just to say that I'm going off to Canada for a month so the story wont be updated for a while. I'm going on a crazy adventure holiday type thing so I shouldnt be going anywhere near a computer. So if there is no update in quiet a while I'm not dead I'm just probably off hunting a moose or something [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif[/img]

Thanks once again!

Catalyst

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