Needs more negative spaceOriginally Posted by Archangel
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In all seriousness, the sig is just far too busy. That's why I think Bill had the right idea darkening it a lot more. They can be visible, but I think it would add to the effect a lot more if you really had to look for them, like when you set the gamma properly first booting up a horror game (Fatal Frame, etc.). Then you would need the white outline as much, Busujima would stand out on her own.
Ark, the white outline makes the render look LQ.
If it's not Isuzu-chan Mii~
The render IS LQ and the white stroke came with it
How about this?
Last edited by Archangel; Tue, 07-13-2010 at 05:47 PM.
I love the avatar. A very nice choice, since it specifies the character without showing too much. The smile is also a great way to show her personality.
I think the sig needs more negative space, like Ryll said.
Peace.
The blood on her face does not look good at all Ark.The render IS LQ and the white stroke came with it
How about this?
If it's not Isuzu-chan Mii~
Its far too busy man. Simply as that.
Kill the zombie's and parts and blood and retry er is what I'd recommend.
There's no central focus at all, when there's so much going on, it's like your looking at a block of something. Negative Space is a must in this case.
Avatar's perfect though, like someone said above, captures and shows her personality.
I like the jumbled chaotic feeling the zombies give in the background. I think if you gave the blood some shadows or just tried erasing parts of it on lowered opacity, and made it smaller on her face. AND did something about that outline, I know its tedious but if you could get rid of it that would be cool.
Try the ctrl-clicking of the layer she's on to select her outline. Then right click with the marquee tool and try to feather and stuff that might work too. Since I see the left side doesn't have much white outline that wouldn't work for the whole thing. if you I think hold shift and select the left side where you dont want to feather it should subtract that from the selection. Maybe its ctrl or alt tho
Got a new mouse and had to test er in photoshop.
Lol, Hollow Ichigo looking at the horizon
Not a fan of the font though
Didn't know the sky is also called the horizon >_>.
Try removing the text all together.
I'm honestly really unsure of what to do with the text in this one; but thankfully I decided to leave out "Just as Aizen planned"
And another:
Last edited by Lucifus; Sun, 08-08-2010 at 04:37 AM.
I think the top one looks better.
If it's not Isuzu-chan Mii~
Gratzy. I'm leaning towards the bottoms text though; I do agree with top choice, but I think I dropped wee bit too much color balancing on the bottom one.
Here's another, and I know I seriously killed this one, but after all the time I put into it, I'ma post it anyway.
I dropped a good hour into this one, but...I just couldn't place a goal as to what I wanted and sharpened/contrasted er way too much.
The initial finish was incredibly light.
This is one I actually did a bit back, but never finished. I was excited for the second season of Darker Than Black I think.
Random Render
Last edited by Lucifus; Sun, 08-08-2010 at 06:41 AM.
Made a sig on another forum that i use, the dimensions are bigger than here so i hope you don't mind me posting it here and asking what you guys think of it!
Walpaper tiem
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It's in rotation though, just wanted to show off the little gotwoot icon i made
After ages of not posting here, I finally made a new set. It is my current, from Ika musume.
Peace.
You fucked up the render's lines when you resized, might want to try some selective blur or to resize it again using other settings
Also, i'm looking for some good The World God Only Knows pics, can anyone help me out? Something featuring Keima would be nice.
The only lines obvious to me are of her shoulder, otherwise I'd say its fine unless we're looking for absolute perfection.
Great job shinta! Simple and clean wins the cake. ^^
Updated it. The slightly cleaner one is my current. This is the older one for comparison.
Peace.
Nailed it, looks much better now. The arrows are still a tad edgy, nothing to be concerned about but i'd suggest some redrawing if you're a perfectionist
Also like the blue gradient you added to the avatar, very subtle
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