Manga in the works *updated*

[Hakeem_21]

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Santah @ Feb 9 2004, 07:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Heres a colour version in progress. Biggest thing im still working on is lighting on face.
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This blond kamii looks a lot better than the green one

Dont you dare to change his eyes, they make him look badass

[ricefarmer]

this stuff really sucks.. sorry to say u have no talent so stop ur plans while u can with the so called &quot;manga&quot; pshh..

[RockLeeisHOT]

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ricefarmer @ Feb 14 2004, 03:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> this stuff really sucks.. sorry to say u have no talent so stop ur plans while u can with the so called &quot;manga&quot; pshh.. </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
you need to get off your soap box. if you don&#39;t like something, then instead of making rude comments like this, shut the fuck up&#33; Can you do better?

[lasaire]

Can we not turn this into a flame war?

Santah, I like your design for Kimi, he does look better with blonde hair. I can tell that you&#39;ve been influenced by Akira Toriyama and DBZ.

Doing a whole manga is alot of work&#33; I wish you good luck and perserverance. I know I&#39;d never make it through the whole way&#33;

[ricefarmer]

actually i can do a shit load better, im a graphics designer idiot

[Santah]

well seings as this is my first effort at digitally colouring anything ever, I wouldn&#39;t expect it to be very good.

Thanks for the constructive criticism

This is a learning expierence, the only way to get better is to practise, so why give up?

Anyway, when reading a manga I usually find the dialogue + story takes the primary focus.

[Santah]

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AnbuPawn @ Feb 14 2004, 01:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> </div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ricefarmer &#064; Feb 14 2004, 04:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> actually i can do a shit load better, im a graphics designer idiot </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
Sorry, but being supposively a &quot;graphic designer&quot; is irrelevant when comparing drawing skills. If you don&#39;t like it, keep to yourself, he&#39;s not hurting anyone.

Santah, keep up the good work, the only way to get better is to draw more The anatomy is a little off for Rikaa, however. The elbow should be about even with the waist. </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
Yeah I noticed that after I inked it, oops

As for Kamii, I have had numerous arguements with the other drawer that his hairline is way too high, to me it looks like it starts right at the top of his skull, thats why his forehead is so large&#33; It will all get ironed out by the first chapter though, so its all good.