*updated version of kamii, see further down the page*

OK well I've got a manga in the works and I just thought I would post a little concept art here to get some feedback.

This is a project shared between 2 peeps.

This guy coming up is known as "Kamii". I cant give away any story but lets just say he is he is the "im too cool for school" bad guy.

Here is the original drawing done by Sean.


It was obvious we needed to tone down the hair a bit, so I sent him back to the drawing board. Kamii also looks too similar to dbz for my tastes, but none of the other charecters he has done so far look the same.

Over the weekend I thought I would practise scanning and colouring in the line art.

Here is the image scanned and cleaned up slightlly by me *note I didnt put too much effort into this as I knew I would have a new picture on Monday to replace this one*


Finally following a tutorial I did my first colouring effort on lineart.


It kind of looks like he has a plant on his head Next version I might make him blonde.

So yeah that was my first effort, thoughts? As I said, on Monday I will have a new version of Kamii which will have simplified hair and less of a dbz look. If anyone is interested I will upload images Monday night/tuesday.