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[joker-kun]

hey, im just wondering what you think of my new (second) wallpaper, for this one i made the backround, and incase you dunno the show its Zoro from One Piece

[Darkflare]

woa. i think that might be a little too intense for a desktop for me. a little too...bright on that black o.O

[Baka-chan]

i like it, but its just a tad too bright for me eyes zoro's my fav from one piece

[AlbinoFury]

aight joker not bad, as for helpful criticism here is a list that will help u make it better;

1. The Wording and the pic next to that is the best part of the wall, its incredibly fluid with he design. Dont mess with that at all. If anything look for a more pronounced font but the one u have now is good too.

2. As for color thats a matter of preference but it is extremely neon, itll hurt your eyes if you stare at it for too long, a subtler green and maybe a dark grey where the black is will, look better. If you keep the black thatll look fine too.

3. The pictures you have just cut out and pasted throughout the body are distracting and make it look more unprofessional, nix those.

4. The picture worked into the frame in the lower left is a good idea u might add another 2 of those type of things throughout.

5. You might try making some of the green rectangles in the background of different opacities itll add a bit of a 3dish level to the look.

6. Oh and make it 1024x768 now 800 itll fit better without any stretching.

Just my thought from an experienced wallpaper maker trying to pass on his wisdom. You can listen, or tell me to fuck off i dont really care. But good work so far on it.

[joker-kun]

lol, no no, I enjoy helpful critism, itll only make me better, and besides im not that prideful, so thnx all perhaps when ill make the next one i will remember these points

[Beautiful Green Beast]

I always use a picture as a background combined with a color. Then i choose 1 or as most 2 pictures ON the wall. Then i usually write something in the bottom, not in the middle...

[joker-kun]

whaddya think of this one?

[.EcHo.]

cool

[AlbinoFury]

its aight, it still seems like you are trying to cram too much in. it has no focal point its just scattered all around.