ok so I started a little Naruto fanfic well little i'm not quiet sure about that but before I continue i would like some of your opinions on this wether it's bad or good or whatever here's the link https://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1646413

any feed back would be greatly appreciated so i can turn my self into a better writer, i always felt that the naruto charachters were a little to young so this fic starts off when naruto has the age of 16 anyway i hope you enjoy bigger and longer chapters will follow this is like the intro to the story