I guess this is where this goes...

[Kiva128]

**All new pages will be posted in this post**

Read RIGHT TO LEFT (text too).

Old Pages:
http://www.uploadit.org/files2/06110...o-Manga-00.jpg
http://www.uploadit.org/files2/06110...o-Manga-01.jpg
http://www.uploadit.org/files2/06110...o-Manga-02.jpg
http://www.uploadit.org/files2/06110...o-Manga-03.jpg
http://www.uploadit.org/files2/06110...o-Manga-04.jpg
http://upl.mine.nu/uplfolders/upload...o-Manga-05.jpg
http://upl.mine.nu/uplfolders/upload...o-Manga-06.jpg
http://upl.mine.nu/uplfolders/upload...o-Manga-07.jpg

The new page(s):

http://upl.mine.nu/uplfolders/upload...o-Manga-08.jpg *new*

Info about the new page(s):

Hi it's me again. Quick update this time. How about that?
Page 08 (9th) is in da house~. *ahem*

Anyways, about the page. As you can see, no crazy ass backgrounds this time. Which is why it came along so quickly. This page is the prelude to one of Hiro's flashbacks which is on the next page. I had some trouble with the second panel, trying to draw Hiro from a lower angle (believe me when I say it's a lot harder than it looks). I wanted a shot of most of Hiro's body because I havn't done one in the manga yet. And people were thinking he was kakashi or something. So now there shouldn't be any confusion (hopefully).

Overall I like this page. *pats himself on back*
Enjoy~ (notice I say that a lot)
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Once again, any comments are appreciated.
Thanks for your patience.

Kiva128

[Darkflare]

the face in the last panel of the 6th page...is kurenai i suppose...looks very strange. other than that, it looks great

[Serpico]

Your backgrounds are really great and intricate, and basically I like it over all. I am really interested to see the rest . I was thinking of doing berserk doujinshi myself and after looking at your stuff I feel inspired to do it! (do you read berserk?)

[Kiva128]

No I haven't read berserk ^^;;
But if you want to you should start the manga thingy. After I finished inking the very first page of mine, I knew that I had to finish it. So perhaps that's all it might take for you as well.

Thanks for the comments so far guys.

[Orochimaru972]

the detail is incredible!! .... i try doing manga sometimes... but i grow impatient and end up stopping...

[.EcHo.]

nice, you draw good..i sux at drawing..

[jing]

good stuff, i look forward to reading more of it.

[Baka-chan]

wow, can't believe you've never drawn manga before looks great. kiba reminds me of a character from some other anime, but i can't think of who...

[Jman]

nice. it takes some skill and patience to do that. good job.


and btw jing that's a funny sig. i love it

[blacken]

I hate you so much right now


That stuff is super awesome its almost an exact copy of the actual manga, are you sure you arent on the design team.

[Kiva128]

*bumpy bumpy*

[Anbu Girl]

COOL!!

I didnt try to draw manga.. I am so lazy

Keep up the good work !!

[Darkflare]

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Anbu Girl @ Dec 18 2003, 06:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> COOL&#33;&#33;

I didnt try to draw manga.. I am so lazy

Keep up the good work &#33;&#33; </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
finally, a girl who is lazy. all the other girls i know are always busy doing 6567854 different things

[Anbu Girl]

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Darkflare @ Dec 19 2003, 04:32 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> </div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Anbu Girl &#064; Dec 18 2003, 06:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> COOL&#33;&#33;

I didnt try to draw manga.. I am so lazy

Keep up the good work &#33;&#33; </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
finally, a girl who is lazy. all the other girls i know are always busy doing 6567854 different things </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
I am lazy in drawing ..but not lazy in other important things

but if I have time to draw manga.. why not&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Darkflare]

i sent you a msg anbu

[Brel]

very nice work there Kiva, looks completely amazing and so much better than i could hope to do so i feel weird mentioning 2 things but you&#39;ve asked for comments so:

1) the way you drew Hiro in the mid ground looks strange and not sized right on page 7, and he also kinda looks like Kakashi except for the small shoulder plate you put on him.

2) small gramatical thingy, just sounds weird to me.
Yume page 7: &quot;We can&#39;t to keep our employer waiting, you know.&quot;
i don&#39;t believe the &#39;to&#39; is supposed to be there, but i fuss over small things like that. to many years of actually listening in the wrong class.

but once again it looks amazing and you could bring the story anyway you want at this point with bringing in whatever characters you want. definetely looking forward to more.

[Darkflare]

to isnt supposed to be there

[Kiva128]

gah&#33; I always do that. Thanks guys.

and about hiro looking like kakashi (I get that a lot actually), it&#39;s generally just the face area. this is what his whole body looks like:

http://kiva128.freewebspace.com/Hiro.jpg
(copy &amp; paste)

thanks again guys. I&#39;ll update the link with the fix later.

[KakashiSensei]

wow dude thats a cool pic, I hope this isnt too much to ask can you do a full body pic of that guy for me, Holding his sword out?? It looks really cool and I cant draw. That would be perfect for making a wallpaper for myself. Do you mind?? If its too much to ask I&#39;m sorry but it looks soo cool. I love guys with swords and wings

[DB_Hunter]

Yea good job, the backgrounds are amazingly detailed.