Poetry

[Jman]

"All the days of my week
I write the name I dare not speak
The girl with the long black hair
My beloved and my dispair."

somewhat about a girl at my school.


credit where it is due:
the poem is a slight change of what appeared on an episode of hey arnold years ago.

[Aclypze]

i'll write a haiku
dont even try to stop me
you mother f*ker

5 by 7 by 5

[GamaKichi]

<u>Night by the Waters Edge</u>
The waves hold my naked body
The wind kissing my breasts
Silky spider webs of hair fall about my face in this salty embrace
Your eyes hold my face and I no longer feel alone in the vast sea
Your soft hand playing with my lips
Your words tempting my heart
Every nerve in my body being filled with the love that surrounds me
Our bodies glistening in the soft moonlight



This was publish in a small poetry book here locally. I guess I&#39;ll put it up for criticism..

[Tippo]

That&#39;s really good&#33; Touching too. I made this one a few years ago and I won a prize for being the most f&#39;ed up kid. Nah, but I got it published in a book. lol.




<u>Self Corruption</u>
Every night I sit and sigh,
Every night I lye and cry.
Dont ask why...
As I stare into this bloodshed knife,
I see my self corrupted life.
Dont ask why...
I want sit and sigh,
I want to lye and cry.
I want you to know why,
I just wanna die.
Leave me be,
Leave me alone,
Let me die on my own.
I needed you,
I wanted you...
Theres nothing I can do.
Please back off,
Let me die alone.
And when i die,
You and only you shall know why.



I was in lack of words, my writing has improved but this one I had like 2 years ago. I&#39;ve gotten better since... somewhat

[GamaKichi]

You are very talented&#33;

[GamaKichi]

Thank you again Tippo&#33; I love to surf and I do it all summer long&#33;&#33; I think you did a great job&#33; Well I can&#39;t stay on long in the hospital but i will have some stuff to post hopefully tommorrow&#33;&#33; Have a great week&#33;


I have nothing to offer
except simple words of truth
No gifts from the fruits that
I bear within
You can have anything that you want but
you can&#39;t touch my heart
It has been hurt one to many times
to let someone in
Everything may seem as though it is done in vain
but it isn&#39;t
Time can cure about anything
And the broken heart that
burdens me will
one day be healed
And then those words I offer
will seem like more
then the day that I told them to you

[GamaKichi]

I HATE the hospital&#33;&#33; I am so bored.. but I got my lap top bakc YAY&#33;
So I have been writing stuff today and it is all kinda random... Please review God Tippo:

You, you with your looks, your touch, your words that moved my heart
You, you who forced me to look into my soul
to learn about how I worked
You, you with all of your love sealed in a kiss
You, you who makes my heart skip, and my hands go numb
You, you who changed me by loving me for who I am

<u>Old bags</u>

Tired of caring the bags under my eyes
tired of the burden my heart has when ever you walk by
The sweet tasting smiles that once greeted me now have faded
into evil heart wrenching stares that pierce my fleshy skin
every day i see your face
Laughs that I oce shared are no longer there
I can no longer look at your sweet child like face and see a naive girl
because all I see now is the face of a bitter old maid

[GamaKichi]

These are some more random things that i wrote today...i don’t know if they are poems.

-suicide is our ultimate sacrifice to ourselves
-laughter is used only to cover up the unhappiness in our lives
-crying is the only emotion that allows us to clean our hearts


running away from me when i needed you the most
no pillars to hole me up
life drifting into the abyss
suicide is every where
no one to lean on
no one is speaking
the quietness is made
from the lies from honest people
people i trust
people i love
you no longer throw flower petals where i walk
now i no longer feel like a god
i am no longer worshiped
by those i pulled into my ice cold touch

[joker-kun]

I love my Naruto yes i do.
I also adore Scrapped Princess and One Piece too.
I am afterall an Anime Otaku.
I must take my leave a poo is due.

[Power PMV]

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (joker-kun @ Dec 4 2003, 10:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> I love my Naruto yes i do.
I also adore Scrapped Princess and One Piece too.
I am afterall an Anime Otaku.
I must take my leave a poo is due.
</td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
that was awesome. Really touching

[joker-kun]

<span style='color:red'>*bows*

thank you thank you&#33;</span>

heres another:

My favorite show is Naruto
Trigun and Bebop are so so
One Piece is super cool
but DBZ will always rule

(Trigun and Bebop are above so so but neede to rhyme)

[Tippo]

I was doing one about Naruto, but I stoped cause I got busy.


Hehe I will later

[Tippo]

LOL you guys are awesome&#33; Keep it goin, this shall not die&#33;

[joker-kun]

Anime is sick and cool.
for TV it will always rule.
I am currently watching Naruto and One Piece too.
Afterall i am an anime Otaku.
Trigun and Bebop were also quite good.
I can go on and on yes i could.
my point is i love Anime.
I watch it day after day.

[Elite Hentai]

ok don&#39;t laugh cuz I&#39;m gonna try now

Hinata is kind
Hinata is shy
Neji makes her cry
Neji is not bad
Neji is sad
Hinata&#39;s father killed Neji&#39;s dad

Hinata loves Naruto
Naruto doesn&#39;t know
There must be something wrong with that bro
Hinata is ignored
Naruto too
That&#39;s why they should stick together like glue

yeah i know it sux

[Tippo]

Awe thats great&#33;

[GamaKichi]

I fear that we are drifting
Like the driftwood at sea
Further and further apart

I fear that those long pauses
Are too long and will
One day turn into a nothing

I fear that my heart like so many other things
Has gone back to stone
For I feel as though I cannot
Forgive

I fear that your love
Has been lost or will be lost
like the driftwood
On the open sea

[Tippo]

Men don&#39;t suck ass&#33; But that is a really good poem.

[GamaKichi]

sorry thank you

[GamaKichi]

<span style='font-family:Arial'>I never seem to experience the amount of sadness that I have when with someone that I love.
Never scared that the inevitable will happen and I am all alone again.
Even though I find someone to fill the gap, he always ends up leaving me alone once again.
Always the same story told to me about how he has fallen in love with me and how he will never hurt me but it seems as though they would leave if the moment were just right.
Never finding what I was truly looking for.
So young and immature are they to what my ideal must be.
Unfortunately, they would leave me and once again, and I would be all alone.
It is not just the boys that fill the void of love but friends as well.
They leave me too.
I try to learn to love and trust but the same thing always happens they leave me alone once again.
To be free from my own thoughts would be better.
To find the part of me that is not afraid of being alone.
Trying to make solitude a part of the void, to fill what others cannot.
Everyone is always caught up in their own worlds so they are never worried about killing someone else’s dreams or even hurting what is left of their spirit.
Never scared that someday it may just end up being turned around on them.
And I will leave them all alone for the first time.
Not scared of hurting their spirit or walking all over their dreams this time.</span>