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For this round, I voted on the updated A Live Arm and Melody of the Past.

A Live Arm: I can see that much effort has been put in to make the story even better. Of course, there are still some flaws... like this run-on sentence:

"I was a bit confused by his question, I mean, it was his dad that made this possible after all, didn’t he know about the experiment?"

Other than that, it was pretty sound, from start to finish. The arm incident remains me of a certain House episode, minus the murdering part.

Melody of the Past: Through the characters' eyes, I could feel their emotions, their pain. The highlight of the story was when Shien met his mother again. It was really good on how the author portrayed the event to the audience. Great imagery.