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    Quote Originally Posted by Uchiha Barles
    Forgive that. It's the writer doing two things: 1) Emphasizing that the Council is NOT ok with what Danzou pulled, and 2) giving us more insight into the viewpoints of the kages with relation to the moral dilemma Naruto's facing. It lets us know a good deal of what he's up against and what he's got going for him if he decides he's going to try and change the world. Maybe it was done poorly (I actually think it was done alright) but it was a good idea.
    I just thought the dialog was clunky and awkward. It didn't seem like a conversation, but rather one, long, poorly-worded speech after another. In any case, they didn't actually seem that upset that Danzou basically tried to usurp the ultimate position of power in Narutoland. Tsuchikage just told him "look man, that ain't gonna work," and no more was said.

    The "furthermore" thing also only seems to happen when the character has nothing to say and just trails off. I see it all the time and it bugs me. Something like:

    Naruto: I want to be the Hokage.
    Sakura: Even if you say that, a ninja like you...

    It's just redundant filler and completely awkward. This chapter had a lot of that kind of dialog.
    Last edited by XanBcoo; Sat, 08-29-2009 at 02:34 AM.

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