you made those with PAINT?
can you draw with pencil, pen or inks?
What you have shows promoise. And please let's get you Photoshop or another higher powered image software.
I don't watch that show at all, but
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ist-Hermit.png
is an awesome job. You show a good sense for doing the texture of the clothing. You will need to study anatomy more before you draw a better actual body though. It's not bad, but pretty mediocre rudimentary with the muscles and overall posture. Try drawing some nudes