it's good work, but I don't think it's as good with Winry in there... the rest of the image is crisp and sharp, but she's somewhat blurred and just... I can't even see her eyes! And her bandana isn't clean either... I just don't think it makes a good contrast with everything else... The Al looks pretty good though.

Finally, one small detail, the last letter at the bottom, the T in Alchemist, it just looks terrible with the little sparkle on it. There's a strange black outline behind the top of the letter that just also looks wrong. Try making the 'sparkle' effect more prevelent on it, because right now it looks just a little too smudged over.

All in all it's very good stuff