What the fuck is going on with that middle girl's hand?
Look how big it is compared to the Redhead's hands. It's in the background, yet it's about twice as large. I know you were trying to go for a foreshortening thing here, but that's not right at all.
The other two girls look like poseable dolls sitting there in the background. Totally unnatural and weird, especially since the way your D&D comics seem to have avoided this problem.