Well, it's another night, another page from my D&Dc fan-Manga:
Well, it's another night, another page from my D&Dc fan-Manga:
Last edited by Zentron; Wed, 01-30-2008 at 09:51 AM.
excellent work on the costumes in this one. if anything, the dialouge is what could be changed. the top panel should probably be "How does... Oh, I see!" and you might want to include exclamation points after he yells out each of the people's "job classes". The dragon spittle and the thief outfit I particularly like
Humans are different from animals. We must die for a reason. Now is the time for us to regulate ourselves and reclaim our dignity. The one who holds endless potential and displays his strength and kindness to the world. Only mankind has God, a power that allows us to go above and beyond what we are now, a God that we call "possibility".
Thanks for noting on the dialogue, I'll make changes and repost the page!(most likely just edit my previous post)Originally Posted by masamuneehs
Also glad you like the adaptions I made
I made the text edits, so now it should read OK.
Right then, onto the next page:
I knew I was neglecting somewhere:
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