Originally Posted by Zentron
So, that's not a problem unless the pages contain actual sexual acts, but based on your description, that's not the case.
Well, after seeing that screenshot XanBcoo posted, I'm not sure what to think of this. In the end dojins are, of course, fanart based on something, but somehow I had hoped this was all from your own head. But naturally you did what you thought was the best way to go.
No, no scenes of sexual acts, just a frame showing bare breasts, and a page of panty shots!
The characters, the intro sequence, the general theme, no, is not my own.... oh yeh, I just read back, I only posted the page and said nothing else, my bad. The whole thing is based on the show from the 80s(the whole point), which I should have explained on the first posting of that page, but after chapter 2, it will all be down to my story telling and my artistic values.(asides from the issues that will be written by a few members of the fan forum)
Yes the pages aren't as good as the others, I was brand-new at this type of thing at the time(Manga drawing)
I should point out, that I was never trained to draw Manga's of any kind, plus, I only have 6 really old Manga's, so not much research material. I was trained as an animator, so this type of thing was and in many ways still is, very alien to me!
*EDIT*
Just realised.... even without me telling anyone the title of the source series, you figured it out by the images on the pages, which is one of my ultimate aims. So thanks for confirming the things I was after.
Last edited by Zentron; Wed, 06-13-2007 at 02:40 AM.
New page time again:
I have edited it also into my previous post, the one which has them in order....ish!
Enjoy
Thats a really nice panel, very clean.
Thanks. I take special precautions
i like it quite a bit, especially the top portion. The bottom panel seems to be a little... I dunno, maybe you could get the surrounding dragons to be a little more distinctive from the surrounding fire? It's hard to tell where the dragons end and the fire/background begins. Well, it's not that tough, but maybe some more shading would help.
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It was kinda the point of have it disorientating! I guess a little more distiction couldn't go amiss.
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