GWS: Event #2 Voting

[Deadfire]

Well it's that time again and it looks to be a interesting one

We have many styles to pick from. From Fan-fiction like to the werid....

I posted the submissions in order I got them On the event explaining thread

The order it's listed there and one the poll

1. Team (The) Fockers
   
2. Team Dropout
   
3. Team Headshot
   
4. Team (The) Purple Sharkcoons
5. Team Katon

[Assassin]

The teams job was to write a naruto filler script, and the only teams that have dont that are the fockers and the dropouts. All the other teams tried to be funny be being random, or copyin terra, which isn't a naruto filler script at all. Those teams should lose by default imo, for not following the guidelines.

Congrats to the dropouts and fockers for having good entries.

[Board of Command]

There are no "guidelines" for a Naruto filler. This has been proven by 51 episodes.

[ChaosK]

There are no "guidelines" for a Naruto filler. This has been proven by 51 episodes.

I hardly count having stupid CS scenes and random CS talk as a "filler"

[Board of Command]

It hasn't been done yet, but there's nothing against that. I wouldn't be surprised at all if they do a CS parody for a future filler.

[masamuneehs]

Well you know I have to be a picky, totally overanalyzing fiend with everything, so here you go. I size up the best and worst of each entry in this 'why am i not studying and doing this' post.

Fockers -
Strengths: A prissy Itachi
Weaknesses: Penis jokes, yup, I feel like I'm in elementary school again.
Overall: A pretty good entry that really started off horribly with too much reliance on the penis joke. Having Lee and Naruto both focus on that was overkill. Itachi and Kisame and some of the random appearances almost saved the day, but naturally you had to go back to the penis thing at the end.

Dropouts-
Strengths: Detailed fight scenes
Weaknesses: Punch line at the end.
Overall: I like that someone took a shot at a serious, action-packed Naruto episode rather than going the easy route of doing comedy. The narration was a little over flowery at points, but the fights were detailed and would have probably made a pretty kickass episode if animated.

Headshot-
Strengths: Excellent use of smoke (no one I ever play with properly employs them...)
Weaknesses: AWP bitches...
Overall: As I love CS:S I thought some of this was absolutely hilarious. At the same time I despise hackers and just imagining God#2 queering it up with an AWP makes me furious beyond imagination... Definitely could have catered to a wider audience is the biggest problem.

Katons-
Strengths: I have nothing to critiscize.
Weaknesses: God you guys are lame.
Overall: Competitions like this blow with people who don't even try in them. Other users wanted to play, but you guys just sit there and don't do shit. If this was my outfit I'd have you all removed ASAP.

Purple Sharkoons-
Strengths: Cross-over cameos.
Weaknesses: Sometimes sloppily written.
Overall: A few funny moments but a little too randomn and weird for my tastes.

The Decision:
After much consideration I decided to vote for the entry that I enjoyed the least upon actually reading, but that I actually think did the job best: writing something that could be used for filler.

I voted for The Dropouts.

Everyone else was sorta funny but also had some humor I just didn't think was very good, things that obviously could never happen in a filler or any episode of Naruto, and the Katons just suck balls. Compared to the last round I think you all put in alot of effort (although i wonder...) and I personally would let all of you stick around for the next round, kicking off all the Katons and God#2 (for using an AWP and hacks) instead.

2nd: Fockers
3rd: Headshots
4th: Sharkcoons

[Jadugar]

@ mage :

I am quite sorry to hear that you are incapable of clicking twice in a row.

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@ masamuneehs :

Maybe the Naruto scene was done horribly but what do you expect from him. I am aware of your dislike towards Fate Stay/Night but even without making a reference to the anime that joke work very well. I had to put that reference in because I am totally in love with that anime and Saber at the moment. I know people who are watching that show certainly would have like it.

As for penis jokes, I had to do justice to the Naruto’s character. I certainly didn’t finish with the penis thing, there was another Itachi/kisame scene.

Itachi was a very good character to use. I could have based all my filler around him and Kisame but I had to include the other characters ( Ebisu and Jiraiya ) to fill the requirements. I had so much Itachi material but I couldn’t fit all that in. That’s my biggest regret.

So you don’t like penis jokes or comedy then I will so a serious action filler just for you. I did do a script about three months ago in my spare time when I got too involved in one of my threads and came to know everything about Neji and Sasuke. But I want that stuff to be animated somehow and I don’t have the means or the resources. You never know maybe I will do it some day.

Also I am tired of people saying that you guys could have done better than this shit. So why don’t you people put your money where your mouth is and show us how it’s done.

[RyougaZell]

I have to admit the punch line at the end was kinda... weird.
But stealing a scroll was the only belivable way to have Kabuto at Konoha.
Hanabi couldn't be away in a mission since she's (at most) in academy (or even hasn't even started, I just made Kabuto believe she was).

Also, we really couldn't have them stealing something good, since Kabuto was going to win... and since we were doing a filler... well... we ended it with some (weak) comedy. Like the bikouchou filler.

Also... I feel the narration suffered in my opinion. The original draft was more detailed, and had more feeling. But since we needed to fit the images we had to edit. Suffice to say, there were about 5 versions of this.

I do wonder why you thought the narration was flowery masa. Just curious (I like critics! They improve my writing).

mage... thanks for the vote. Enough said.

-> www.fanfiction.net/~ryougazell

Cheers to the fockers. Even full of randomness... their submission was the only I really did fully read. Several mistakes on our own pain me... but the editions were needed.

[ChaosK]

Unfortunatly because of all our individual schedules, we couldn't fit in my perfect ending at the end so it ending rather abruptly.