Damn it, man. You could work for a studio. An excellent piece of work. Not only technically but also artistically.
Although I'm not really a fan of Lelouch's expression. Not that there would be anything wrong with how your drew it, but I just like to see him with a wicked expression (and C.C. with a mysterious one). No doubt he has a right for it as well but a distraught Lelouch just doesn't look like a proper Lelouch...