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    GWS: Event #2

    GWS: Event #2

    First things first the people that have been voted off (And as such can play anymore) are
    • darkshadow
    • Lazykid
    • XanBcoo
    • Psyke


    And now the event is...."Write a Naruto filler episode."

    That's right, after hearing so many people whine about how they could make an episode better than the Naruto fillers we're going to put you to the test. This episode you write has the following rules

    • Must be a Naruto filler episode.
    • The plot has to have to do something with your requirements. (I.E 1 main character, 1 random/minor character and 1 Miscellaneous thing (could be a setting, a line or an attack)
    • Flashbacks must be contained to less than 3 total lines
    • Must have pictures referring to the character talking.
    • Must have at least one action scene which will be a picture of the major attack (Say if you have Naruto Rasenganing something have a picture of him doing it)
    • At least has to be 50 lines long with 70 being a cap. However it must be under 10,000 characters as it must be able to fit in one forum post
    • NO SPOILERS!
    • You can use any other characters you wish in your story
    • You must have your main charactors to have at least 10 lines each in your filler
    • No hentai!, however you can use fanart if you wish
    • You can use as many images as you want in your eps, however I want lines out of the pictures. So that means I do not want any words in the picture


    Now you can do this by following this example of art by our Sexfiend himself

    - You are my only son, yet I've never held you since you were a baby. Take care of Bulma, I will now detonate myself. But please, do not forget to resurrect me with the dragonballs...
    - What the hell are you talking about?
    - Oh, sorry, I was reading Dragonball volume 39. IT'S SO SAD WHEN VEGETA DIES!!!!!
    - But doesn't he get resurrected at the end of the same volume?
    - ....................................
    - You knew that right?
    - .......
    - I mean it's kind of obvious, with the.. you know.. dragonballs, resurrection and all. Nobody dies in that series and...
    - Cindy, there are two things I hate in this world. The first is smelly bathtubs and the second is SPOILERS.
    - Oh sorry, Orochimaru-sama.. I didn't know that... ehh...
    - Sing for me, Sally.
    - I hate this fucking job.


    These are the storylines that will be given out. Team Captains please PM me to get your event.

    1.Story must include Kabuto and Hinata's sister, also must feature at least one 64 Point Strike

    2. Story must include Jiraiya and Ebisu, also at least one scene at the ramen shop

    3. Story must Include Naruto and Sarutobi Asuma, also must have Naruto use a new move (make the move original, not some variation of the normal moves)

    4.Story must include Kakashi and (Ayame, the daughter of the ramen chef yes she has a name) and must include one Sharingan action scene

    5. Story must include Orochimaru and Inuzuka Kiba and must have a scene at the mountain wall of the village.

    Remember that I will add things to this as questions arise. Please use this thread for those things
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    Team (The) Fockers

    This is Team Fockers submission

    Gotwoot Monkeys Present : The Big Showdown at the Ramen shop

    The story is divided into seven parts. They are all clickable links.
    All the images are very big. So when you click on them, enlarge them again.

    Read the story from the beginning till the end to fully enjoy it.


    GOTWOOT MONKEYS PRESENT
    • KONOHA LOTUS
    • THE ODD COUPLE
    • SASUKE IS BACK
    • ITACHI IS IN TOWN
    • THE BIG SHOWDOWN - PART ONE
    • THE BIG SHOWDOWN - PART TWO
    • A TOUCH AND GO SITUATION
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    Team Dropout

    A cloaked man jumped around the woods in Fire Country. His face was hidden
    by a white ANBU mask. Approaching Konoha he stopped. He removed his mask,
    revealing the missing-nin Kabuto.

    I can't believe Orochimaru-sama
    ordered me this.

    Go to Hyuuga manor, and retrieve a
    red scroll.
    Hyuuga manor? Red scroll? There must be
    tons of them!
    Not with Hyuuga Hana, Hiashi's late
    wife's mark.

    What is he planning?

    Placing his mask, Kabuto jumped towards the south wall. As a spy he found a
    breach in the wall, near Grounds 9, where Kunoichis trained as children.Kabuto walked through the busy streets. As civilians avoided ANBU, he was left alone. He smirked when he saw Naruto being pummeled by Sakura, while other genins watched. Jumping away he missed a dog's whine.He entered Hyuuga Manor and used a sleep jutsu on the guards. His sources said Hiashi was out of town. Moving around he found his target.Hyuuga Hanabi was training alone. Her moves were graceful, unlike her Hinata's. Noticing the hour she stopped. In half hour she had to train with Neji. Her father had ordered her so, she reluctantly agreed. She didn't hate Neji, but he still was a branch member. Prodigy or not, she was superior to him. Stepping out she saw several fallen Hyuugas on the grounds. "Byakugan," she checked for vital signs. They were alive, but why were they unconscious?

    A sleep jutsu was used. An
    intruder?

    She jumped on the roof and scanned around.
    Someone is in Mother's room?
    Hanabi saw the intruder messing it up.
    How dare he!?
    She dashed inside. Enraged by his actions, she didn't stop to analyze the
    level of the enemy, as she should have according to her training.
    Where is that damn scroll?
    Annoyed, Kabuto checked the last possible place, under the bed's couch.
    Found it! What a strange place to hide it… What's so special about this?

    He stopped before opening the scroll. Sensing a faint pulse of chakra, he
    back jumped to evade a palm. Landing he saw a small girl glaring at him.

    How dare you mess Mother's room!
    Must be Hiashi's youngest.
    ANBU business.
    ANBU? I don't believe you. If the ANBU
    needed anything you would've come when father was home. Plus you put the
    guards to sleep.
    She isn't naive as I expected. Too
    bad, I'll dispose of her.

    He charged. Hanabi, unprepared, was kicked through a window. With grace
    known only to Hyuugas, she landed on her feet, and immediately jumped
    towards the intruder.
    BYAKUGAN!
    Hanabi attacked, yet her moves were evaded by the older nin. Kabuto was
    impressed. Even if the girl wasn't hitting him, she wasn't leaving openings
    either. He smirked finally seeing one, and went for it.

    Kabuto suddenly flinched. The girl managed to hit him. He saw her smirking
    and understood he had fallen into a trap.

    She purposely left an opening! I
    underestimated her… no wonder the Hyuuga's want to name her heiress… it
    won't happen again.


    The medic-nin started healing his right arm with chakra. The girl's blow
    wasn't fatal, but it burned like hell.

    Damn Hyuugas and their Jyuken.
    What? The damage I did to his chakra
    flow is recovering…

    I must praise you girl. You got me. But
    this ends now.

    He charged towards Hanabi who twirled in her feet, letting him pass. Taking
    her chance, she jumped, and did a reversed roundhouse kick towards his head.
    Expecting the blow, he caught her by the ankle. Still in the air, Hanabi
    kicked again, with her free leg, towards the man's face. Expecting the move,
    he caught her other leg, with his other arm, but was unable to evade what
    came next. Hanabi, upside down, used her Jyuken in his stomach, freeing
    herself.


    Hanabi smirked as she landed. Some blood could be seen in the man's mouth.

    Don't underestimate Hyuugas. We are
    superior.
    She definitely has the Main Family's
    ego.


    He laughed and healed again. Hanabi almost growled.

    What are you laughing at? Even if you
    heal, I'll get you again.
    Is that so? Too bad your ego clouds you.

    Angered, Hanabi tried to run towards the man, but fell on her face. With
    tears in her eyes she tried to stand up.

    Why can't I move?
    I've severed your leg's nerves.

    Her eyes widened. He did that when he had caught her. She couldn't stand.

    Give up. Unless you're a skilled
    medical-nin you won't be able to move for hours, but you won't live that
    long.

    Kabuto approached to kill. For an academy student, she had potential. Left
    alive she could grow up to be a fearsome opponent. Midway he jumped away,
    sensing an offending chakra.

    GATSUUGA!

    Damn it! When did he arrive?

    Kabuto cursed as his shoulder was pierced by a kunai. During his jump he was
    showered with dozens of them and one hitted. Lifting his gaze he saw Tenten.

    Hanabi! Are you okay??
    One-san…

    Hanabi glanced at Hinata, who held her. In front of her stood Neji, with his
    Byakugan activated. To his left was Tenten. Behind the intruder were Kiba
    and Akamaru. And entering the grounds, where the idiot Naruto, and Tsunade's
    apprentice, Sakura.

    Who are you?

    The man planned in silence, as he was outnumbered.

    I knew I recognized the smell Akamaru
    found. You're the ANBU that healed Hinata at the Chuunin Exam. Now that you
    are here I recognize your smell… Kabuto.

    Kabuto!!
    Kabuto-san?

    Kabuto removed his mask. Hinata and Tenten gasped noticing his Sound
    Hitai-ate.
    Its been a while. Naruto-kun?
    That Hitai-ate…
    You didn't know? Kabuto works for
    Orochimaru…
    WHERE'S SASUKE!!
    Loud as always…

    Naruto ran towards Kabuto who captured threw him towards Sakura. Both landed
    hard. Kiba jumped towards Kabuto, who kicked him away. The sound-nin,
    expecting Tenten's attack, managed to evade her weapons, and casted a
    poisonous gas jutsu. Tenten jumped away, covering her mouth and nose.
    Kabuto's smirk faded away.

    You're in the range of my divination…
    HAKKE ROKUJUU YONSHOU!



    Neji's 64 point strikes connected, and merciless, closed Kabuto's tenketsu.
    Hanabi watched wide-eyed. She knew Neji was good, but seeing him on a real
    fight was impressive.

    Tell me why you're here.
    Neji-san… he took a scroll from Mother's
    room.
    I see… then I'll recover it Hanabi-sama.
    Will you?

    Kabuto stabbed Neji with his chakra scalpel and kicked him towards Tenten.

    No way…
    You damn Hyuuga's are so full of
    yourselves. You didn't think I would come unprepared ? Before entering
    Konoha I made sure to protect my Tenketsus with chakra. Although the
    protections barely held. Time to flee.


    Kabuto jumped away, taking advantage of the situation.

    Akamaru! Let's go!

    Neji berated himself for lowering his guard. He sat, while Tenten checked
    his shoulder.
    He got away… with Mother's scroll…
    I wonder why he wanted it…
    You've seen it?

    Hinata explained. Hanabi was confused. Why had he taken it? Even so… she was
    annoyed that something of her mother had been stolen.

    What happened to Naruto and Sakura
    anyway?

    Sakura regained consciousness. Something hit her hard. Without opening her
    eyes she felt an unfamiliar touch… Opening them she noticing Naruto's lips
    on hers. Angered beyond comprehension she punched him away.

    NARUTO YOU PERVERT BAKA! HOW DARE YOU
    KISS ME!

    Hinata faints, Tenten smirked and Neji shakes his head. Later Hanabi heard
    Kiba had lost track of Kabuto.

    Orochimaru-sama, I've returned with the
    scroll.
    Excellent! Now I can make the Hyuuga's
    secret shampoo!
    Shampoo?
    Yes! I can have my hair shinny again! Itachi took my copy before I left Akatsuki.
    I went through all of that… for this?

    - END -
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    Team Headshot submission


    : Oh yes. Dance baby dance!
    : Hey shut up I’m trying to eat ramen.

    : Oh shit, he’s coming at me. Where’s my kunai?!?!
    : I’ll give you mine if you promise to stfu.
    : How do you drop a kunai? H4x0r!!
    : WTF…?
    : You know, I’ve always known that you’re a haxxing little faggot.
    : Did you accidentally eat Chouji’s mushroom shitpaste today?
    : No need to lie. I know you’re a haxxing bitch.
    : Ok good, I’m a haxxing bitch. Got proof?
    : I’ve been specing you. Just wait, let me find those screenshots…
    : Before you do that...aren’t you busy with something?
    : Oh shit! I forgot!
    : You sure did, dumbass. Stop smoking that weed.
    : Wait, how did you get here so fast? You were still at B just a minute ago.
    : ……………………
    : Oh wtf! You’re a haxxing faggot too!
    : kthxbye *noclip*
    : Goddamn %*@#^%$^%&$$^%&&^&^$& fag!!!!!!1111one
    : Hey Asuma I’ll join your team. It’s only fair.
    : …sigh…okay fine.
    * Naruto has joined the counter-terrorist force *
    : @ Hokage Mountain: Enemy spotted.
    : @ Ramen Shop: Roger that.

    : Shit, they’re onto us.
    : No worries, young padawan. Hold out your hands.
    : Shit man! Is that what I think it is? Where did you get that? It’s banned!
    : Nothing is banned if you put your mind to it. It is our way of the terrorist.
    : *takes the AWP*

    : Aim well, young padawan. Or should I say, aimbot well? Muhahahahaha!

    : Oh noes!!11 They’re trying to blow up Hokage Mountain!
    : First they blow up the Aztec temple, and now this? WTF is wrong with them?
    : Remember this, young child. Hax corrupt your mind.
    * Naruto has disconnected. *
    : /msg Naruto omg sorry I take that back. Come back lolz!
    * Naruto has joined the counter-terrorist force. *
    : Don’t pull that shit again or next time I’m not coming back.
    * gunshot *
    : AHHHH! I’m hit!
    : WTF…99 dmg!
    : Remember, always aim for the penor, not the head.
    : If you had speedhax you would have dodged that bullet. Noob.
    : I swore to my 3 blind sisters that I would never hax.
    : But it’s okay if you smoke weed? That makes a lotta sense.
    : Fine. I’ll hax if you can prove it’s worthwhile.
    : Okay fine. Watch this.

    : AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! My penor! He impaled my penor!

    : I can’t believe my eyes. He just used the super ultimate omega attack – Phantom Kunai Shot! An attack that shoots a chakra-infused kunai that can penetrate walls and hit its target's penor with 100% accuracy. Could it be? No, that’s not possible.
    : Oh, but it’s true.
    : Wha-? But- YOU’RE A HAXXOR TOO!
    : Go ahead. Noclip. Run away like the coward you are.
    : Muhaha. No need. My mission has already been accomplished.
    : Hey Naruto, what’s that big cloud of smoke over there?
    *beep*beep*beep*
    : Oh shit, it’s the bomb! They covered it with a smoke!
    : Hurry, defuse it! I still need to carve my face on there.
    : Muhahahahahahahahahaha.

    : Oh god! My eyes! I can’t see shit!
    *beep*beep*beep*beep*beep*beep*

    : /msg Chuck_Norris Sir, mission accomplished.
    : Good work, Team Headshot. Now go and pick up the limbs of [THS]God2. We’ll see if we can sew him back together.
    : Roger that. [THS]Lumber out.
    : And remember kids, [THS]Lumber was able to escape only because he hax.
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    Team (The) Purple Sharkcoons

    Because them wrote their submission in word as well didn't include the urls of their images (Thus I can't post it in the style of the above two) I'll have to give you the Word Doc they give me. I counted their charactor count and it is still under even if they put the urls in

    Their submission in word titled "Stupid things really can happen more then once in a day......"
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    Team Katon

    Well guess what... I don't have a submission from them

    So yeah, it sucks to be them...
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    So the Dropouts win again!

    Vote off is as per normal guys due friday!
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