Heh. The story, so far, works surprisingly well considering there is no story...

I think it's better than you give it credit for. The movement is not that bad in my opinion. However, you really should use a ruler, man, with the frame borders. Drawing wobbly freehand lines like that makes it look extremely bad.

And I have heard from very reliable sources that every time somebody uses a scanner producing that bad scans, God himself descends from his throne and kills 24 innocent kittens with his own hands. So for the sake of everything holy, get a better scanner! Your current one doesn't make justice for your efforts.

As an extra detail there was a mound under the tree on the first page, but on page two it has disappeared, I think...