My new bands first song :D!

[Santah]

My first song with my new band Flisk

Unfortunatelly I didnt have access to a studio this time round, so this was all recorded in my lounge room with home recording gear. Personally I am really happy with it... but I'd love to hear what you guys think of it.

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Some pics:

singer:


me and her:


just finished playing:


The song was written by me and on the track im playing the acoustic and electric guitar. Thanks to anyone that takes the time to listen [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif[/img]

Oh and, anyone on myspace? Add us to friends please [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-blush.gif[/img] Myspace

[Phoenix20578]

It has a good beat. The vocals are really good too.

[PSJ]

What kind of music is it?

[Assertn]

haha, what is it with bands and their fascination with myspace?

[The Heretic Azazel]

That's one hot piece of ass.

[XanBcoo]

Damn. I loved it.

Very nice. The singer is really awesome.

[eat_toast]

i liked it, i hope you do well. also, ill add you on myspace. : )

[Foomanchew24]

Im downlaoding cause I have nothing better to do at the moment. Ill report back after listening.

[Lefty]

It's a good song for a first time out but you need to consider brining more depth to the gutair, it sounds too one dimesional. Making a live recording of this song would prove to sound much better than this studio version. But I still give it three and half out five.

[Koyuki]

Yea, I agree Lefty. I think the vocal is too high. But it's nice song.

[SK]

I think it sucks.

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[A.y.a.m.e.5.6.8.6.1]

That was awesome! You have a really good voice. Good job!

[Santah]

Thanks everyone

Originally posted by: Lefty
It's a good song for a first time out but you need to consider brining more depth to the gutair, it sounds too one dimesional. Making a live recording of this song would prove to sound much better than this studio version. But I still give it three and half out five.

Yeah I know exactly what you are talking about... We are going to re-record practically everything next weekend. I've rewritten the acoustic guitar part so it sounds a bit more interesting.

Originally posted by: SK
I think it sucks.

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Thanks for the useful crit *HUGE ROLLING OF EYES*

[XanBcoo]

Originally posted by: Santah
Thanks everyone

Originally posted by: Lefty
It's a good song for a first time out but you need to consider brining more depth to the gutair, it sounds too one dimesional. Making a live recording of this song would prove to sound much better than this studio version. But I still give it three and half out five.

Yeah I know exactly what you are talking about... We are going to re-record practically everything next weekend. I've rewritten the acoustic guitar part so it sounds a bit more interesting.

Can you post that when you've done it? I'd love to hear it.

[Assassin]

definately a good song. however like honoko said, the singer needs to articulate more. but she has a great voice though.

as far as the music goes, i think its good, but not quite fitting for the way its sung. seperately the music and singing are great, but together they dont work as well. perhaps more variety in instruments would help.

imo, for the type of song u've written, and considering how the singer sings it, a slower 'background' music would be better (like the music/singing in My Immortal - Evanescence).

all in all, great job. be sure to post the revised version up when its done. best of luck to you both

[The Heretic Azazel]

Originally posted by: Santah
Thanks everyone

Originally posted by: Lefty
It's a good song for a first time out but you need to consider brining more depth to the gutair, it sounds too one dimesional. Making a live recording of this song would prove to sound much better than this studio version. But I still give it three and half out five.

Yeah I know exactly what you are talking about... We are going to re-record practically everything next weekend. I've rewritten the acoustic guitar part so it sounds a bit more interesting.

Originally posted by: SK
I think it sucks.

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Thanks for the useful crit *HUGE ROLLING OF EYES*

Well, you wanted to know what people thought about it, and you weren't all sarcastic with people who liked the song but didn't give any specific reason.

[XanBcoo]

Not that it makes any difference, but only eat_toast said that it was good w/out mentioning at least one reason why they liked it.

I guess it just seemed like SK was trying to be an ass.

[Honoko]

agree w/ lefty about guitar... also i'm not sure if it's the recording and space or not but your singer needs to articulate the words more clearly. otherwise, i'm impressed. keep going.

[SK]

I think it sucks, so what? Don't ask questions you don't want the answer to.

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[NM]

Overall, I thought it was pretty good! Best part about it was the music. The singer was good to, I think you guys have started on the right track. Good luck to you both!