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http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/4...lsigreadit.jpg
A work in progress. Sadly, the concept just doesn't work when I have to resize down to the sig dimensions. Tedious rework on the left would fix that part, but I can only increase the size of the text on the third panel so much.
Hmmm... i see what you're trying to do der
If it was me I'd either summarize the joke to a single panel or would use symmetrical divisions for each one
I think I know what you're getting at, I'll try something like that when I have some free time later.
What manga is that from?
Koi wo Suru no ga Shigoto Desu. Warning: It is borderline hentai.
It's a short but cute series about a working couple.
I'll be working up a couple of variants on the formatting like Arch suggested. His suggestions gave me a few different ideas on how it could work.
My new set sucks, need to find some renders >_>
How's this?
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/4684/sig2sm.jpg
Not happy about the text at all, any ideas?
It is a hentai.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ryllharu
Do you even need that text? I think it diverts attention away from the main set of the picture (the one you have right now is fine)!Quote:
Originally Posted by Archangel
Here are some more pictures I've found of Keima:
http://oreno.imouto.org/post?page=1&...atsuragi_keima
Leaving the text comments aside, the white sig does appear sharper than the coloured one. While I'll lean towards the coloured one, the blur makes me uncomfortable.Quote:
Originally Posted by enkoujin
I had to get creative, it's a screencap
The old picture feel goes along with the divinity of the image, i think it turned out pretty well but i sure wish i had it in 1080p
Says you. The focus is not on sex, it is on the story. That makes it an adult/mature title, not a hentai. You wouldn't call Berserk a hentai, you wouldn't call Koibana Onsen a hentai, nor would you call Peridot a hentai. Is Seikon no Qwaser a hentai? Is Battle Royale?Quote:
Originally Posted by enkoujin
Just because they have sex in them, that doesn't mean it is a hentai series.
Another round, I need another critique!
Susukihotaru from Zakuro. Fell in love during episode 4.
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9...hotaru1smr.jpg
and full size uncropped:
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9...hotaru1.th.jpg
It needs a border and some sharpening, but I like it.
Susukihotaru is great.
Added border, sharpened a bit, hopefully not too harshly.
Much better I think.
New set from Ikamusume.
So no one really gives a damn about the shrimp, even outside of the show.
New set featuring Kon from Soredemo Machi wa Mawatteiru.
No one really gives a damn, but new avatar.
I'm starting to give a damn about the attention whoring though...
If you want comments do something a little more intricate, there's nothing to discuss about your latest works. That's not to say they're bad, just plain.
If you mean attention whoring as in trying to get this thread more attention, then your right.
This thread has been dead for a while now. It's almost like people don't want to post here at all since even those asking about the characters in my sets do it via pm.
And I would think that doing simple stuff would have encouraged more people to comment on ways to improve them (this is not my intent though, I just liked them as they were).
whats wrong with posting sigs u've just made in a thread for sigs u've just made again?Quote:
Instead of having loads of individual threads with ppl posting random sigs they made, its a lot more sensible to jst have 1 thread for it. i know there is an avatar rating thread in general discussion, but thats not really to do with showing off a sig uve jst made and its not in the fanart section