Yeah, I've seen a few of yours. They've been the most helpful, actually. The reason I think the Gaara one was so succesful was because of the way I used the c4d renders. I might try another one based off of c4d renders again soon, actually.
Going along with what Kage said about "simpler,"
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j1...ukenm1copy.png
The text was supposed to be more suttle :/ I'll have to fix that.
I also made another version of it where it's lighter and somewhat more vibrant. Once again, text problems.
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j1...ukenm2copy.png