new neji wallpaper

[jing]

well i created a new thread instead of the other one, because that one is more focused on sigs rather than wallpapers welll anywhoo heres my wallpaper

http://gallery.cybertarp.com/albums/userpics/14590/NEJIwall.jpg

enjoy
please coment on this/help me improve.

[NM]

Its not bad. I really love the background to your wallpaper. Kinda does go along with Neji's attack. Good job.

[Assertn]

well, if i was to be really picky and probably hypocritical too, then i'd say that the pose neji's in seems relatively calm compared to the scene around him. It would seem that one showing neji perhaps in mid spin (or at least having his hair flying and partially twirled around him) would be more suitable

nice bg though, did you make that?

[AlbinoFury]

Originally posted by: AssertnFailure
well, if i was to be really picky and probably hypocritical too, then i'd say that the pose neji's in seems relatively calm compared to the scene around him. It would seem that one showing neji perhaps in mid spin (or at least having his hair flying and partially twirled around him) would be more suitable

nice bg though, did you make that?

yeh im agreeing with assertn too, i mean its good as is but you can tweak it to make the character seem more like part of the wallpaper, maybe try adding some circular motion blur trails or something off of neji.

Also maybe its just me but I always like some sort of text imbedded into the wallpaper it gives it a little context and makes it more of identifiable wallpaper instead of just a graphic piece.

Also neji seems a bit off center from the center focus of the bg, he really should somehow be situated in a symetrical way to the center of the swirl, itd just look more apt.

Oh and u might go over ur cut of the neji image again around the hair areas, the rest seems pretty smooth but the hair especially on the left has some particles, some remaining white, and its a bit rough, just uber zoom in and take a small eraser to it i/expressions/face-icon-small-tongue.gif

The bg though is killer though fits neji, even though it may not fit that picture the best i/expressions/face-icon-small-tongue.gif

i know that was lots of criticism but its what makes us better, right, the little stuff i/expressions/face-icon-small-tongue.gif

Good work though man, keep up the good shizza!

[jing]

thanks for help guys.
yeah i agree with him standing too calmly, i wanted to find him in a battle stance. its so rare to find pics of him.
yeah i did make the bg n il try centering it too.

[Koyuki]

Pretty nice. For me it's to bright. And you should blur it a bit.
But still it's pretty damn nice. Where did you find that fanart?

[tensai]

i like it a lot, but i also agree with the things people have mentioned above
to me it looks like the pose where he was getting ready for the 64 hit tenketsu
if you decide to leave it the way it is, then a background of the scene where the ground turns into the yin-yang looking thing look awesome
hope this was of any help

[jing]

thanks all.
i got the fanart from www.degree-anime.com
and there are plenty of wicked fanarts there aswell.

i wanted to also add in the kanji in the outer layer of the ying yang when he was about to do the 64 hands. but i got tired. maybe next time.

[Uzumaki Naruto]

yo that is sick man, keep up the good work

[r3n]

that effect kicks ass, used it on some of my cs-manager clanpics i made, its pretty simple to make, but v nice looking i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif

[Assertn]

what effect would that be? it looks like patches of color was smudged across and then twisted alot....am i right?

[Gods_Son]

I like it, just add some writing perhaps.

[r3n]

its the same effect i used on this (http://jtownend.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/blindside.jpg)
involves a couple of twirl filters obviously nd other stuff. tutorial for it should be somewhere on www.good-tutorials.com

[Shadow-wolf]

That was very cool. Who knows? Maybe he will be able to attack like that in the future.

[jing]

r3n got it.
i learnt it from the site he posted.

[lasaire]

I quite like it...there are some anatomical problems with the fanart itself, but the wall utilizes its effects nicely.

BTW, where did your source fanart come from? Care to give a link?

[jing]

http://www.degree-anime.com