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RasenDori
Tue, 09-12-2006, 12:33 AM
part 2 neji. if youre an anime only naruto fan and dont want the hew looks spoiled, dont click

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39644102/

dreamwatcher
Thu, 10-19-2006, 11:06 AM
yea neji is totally badass, great job of drawing him

Boomstick
Thu, 10-19-2006, 11:54 AM
Nice job RasenDori, Neji kicks ass

XanBcoo
Fri, 10-20-2006, 08:30 PM
A bit of critique...

You drew his head waaaaaay too big for his body. With a smaller head he'd look a lot better proportioned.

There's also something about his left leg that really bugs me. I don't think that stance is physically possible.

nests
Sun, 10-22-2006, 10:13 AM
If you look at the rest of his art you will see thats RasenDori's style.
I like the fact you didnt try to copy the original, but insted you added your own twist.
I like this one (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23179450/) and the guy who paints I wont say his name but you probably know who

RasenDori
Sun, 10-22-2006, 11:12 PM
A bit of critique...

You drew his head waaaaaay too big for his body. With a smaller head he'd look a lot better proportioned.

There's also something about his left leg that really bugs me. I don't think that stance is physically possible.

its not possibe, but i was a bit of a big todd mcfarlane fan as a kid


If you look at the rest of his art you will see thats RasenDori's style.
I like the fact you didnt try to copy the original, but insted you added your own twist.
I like this one (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23179450/) and the guy who paints I wont say his name but you probably know who

in all honest i hate that picture of naruto. i drew it over a year ago and every now and then deviants still fav it. im working on a full color pic of the "painter" right now, its almost done, but im in the transition of moving, and im working on a comic, but i hope to finish it soon.

Terracosmo
Sun, 10-22-2006, 11:37 PM
Head's too big, like it otherwise. part 2 neji rocks.

SK
Sun, 10-22-2006, 11:51 PM
Do you foreshadow when you draw?

XanBcoo
Mon, 10-23-2006, 03:38 AM
If you look at the rest of his art you will see thats RasenDori's style.
I like the fact you didnt try to copy the original, but insted you added your own twist.
His other stuff looks great, especially his comic. The big heads fit with the style. This Neji looks terribly proportioned though. A thin body and a big head don't go well together. Makes Neji look blocky, and sorta like he has a physical impediment.

its not possibe, but i was a bit of a big todd mcfarlane fan as a kid
Heh, now that you say that, I can tell. But even if you were going for that style, don't you think the rest of Neji's body is a bit stiff?? I think that's what was bothering me about it before.

Don't get me wrong. It's a great picture, but the first thing I noticed about it were the flaws I pointed out.

samsonlonghair
Mon, 10-23-2006, 04:01 AM
That's an awesome job RasenDori. Neji looks great.

RasenDori
Mon, 10-23-2006, 10:31 AM
His other stuff looks great, especially his comic. The big heads fit with the style. This Neji looks terribly proportioned though. A thin body and a big head don't go well together. Makes Neji look blocky, and sorta like he has a physical impediment.

Heh, now that you say that, I can tell. But even if you were going for that style, don't you think the rest of Neji's body is a bit stiff?? I think that's what was bothering me about it before.

Don't get me wrong. It's a great picture, but the first thing I noticed about it were the flaws I pointed out.

well it was pretty much just a quick sketch that i decided to color cause i wanted to try some stuff with photoshop. there are some anatomy errors, and i would have most likely pic up on them sooner if i had taken more time with it. generally do a few sketches of a character before i do something... but i didnt do that either. i'll do better work in the future when im not so bogged down for time